Analysis of Someone you loved



You father is somebody you loved him dearly And he loves you without limits dear friend You have too good in you life You always seem to find things to complain about you life you complain that you wish that you really had freedom in you life Yes you father gave you some freedom for you to live your life the way you wanted but you take freedom for granted don't you know that lots of soldiers sacrifice there life so you could had some freedom I feel that you don't really care about that but I must say that is very important don't you know that you father had made you And me with his holy hands many years a go and he had placed us to live Here on earth a beautiful life we have here on earth that you father gave it to us you don't seem to like the at all Also you complain about the earth by saying that it is over populated also that is our home that you father placed us Here to live every single day also we must live our lives to the fullest Because that is what you father want us to do please understand that we are not going to live forever because You father made our lives that way also we both will die  someday when we Are older many years ago we were only babies and you father had to look after us  he had to change our diapers 6 times a day We could only communicate to you father by crying also you father feed us some homemade baby food also to drink we got fresh squeezed Orange juice It was very delicious  and also the baby food was delicious After you father had finished feeding us he put us in our cribs for us to have a nap we both were a chubby babies every single month we had grown a little and also we needed new baby clothes so you father went to the second hand store to purchase some new baby clothes also our father had to change our clothes when he changed our diapers at 4 pm you father woke us up from our nap And you father had played a little bit with us until supper time tree months later we had our baptism We had been baptized by you father with the holy water and also we didn't cry one year later we were no longer babies We stopped wearing diapers and we started living our childhood life We also had learned to play with toys that you father bought For us at the second hand store we were brothers and we were very lucky to have each other in our lives and 2 months later we had our confirmation You father thought us how to pray We had first prayed for each other then we pray for you father We asked him to keep us alive each day because we need to be alive And life is the gift that you father gave to us one year later our childhood life ended and we became teenagers when we became teenagers we had our communion We had cried out of joy


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Characters 2,707
Words 528
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 2,144
Words per line (avg) 529
Letters per stanza (avg) 2,144
Words per stanza (avg) 529

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The poem someone you loved Is a new poem written by Aldo kraas

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Written on October 02, 2021

Submitted by aldokraas093 on October 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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