Analysis of Fate



Dawn breaks early,
The moon sets late.
Desperate to see another,
But simply not their fate.

Rays of passion shine,
Spreading warmth below.
He’s without his love,
He’s alone; barely aglow.

Shadows grow long,
The golden hour’s begun.
Leaves crackle lightly,
His pain will be undone.

She wakes from her slumber,
But he’s barely in sight,
They share a longing look,
He sets; taking her light.

She reflects his devotion,
They’ll try again tomorrow.
Hope exists, though slight;
His pain, her sorrow.

If you were the sun,
That’d make me the moon.
Destined to be apart,
Except those brief afternoons.


Scheme ABCB XDXD XEAE CFXF EDFD EXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 1110 0111 1011010 110111 11101 10101 10111 1011001 111 0101001 11010 111101 111010 111001 110101 111001 1011010 110101 10111 11010 11001 11101 101101 011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 583
Words 100
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 77
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Written on September 20, 2021

Submitted by hosejose on October 02, 2021

Modified by hosejose on October 03, 2021

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