Analysis of Darkness in the light of the Moon



Darkness in the light of the moon :

Shining bright  yet I see darkness ,
Changing shapes , shifting in my heart ,
I can’t tell the difference from light or dark ,

When I look at you I fall apart,
Covered by clouds or fate? I feel so lost
Because In the darkness I saw a spark ,

Stars die , but you are always there
My feelings are twisted how is that fair,
Reflection of you staring back ,
Somehow when I lost you I found my path

Now your gone, and I miss you,
This isn’t goodbye,
no matter what your in the sky,
I will see you soon,
My mind forever trapped, by the darkness in the light of the moon


Scheme A XBC BXC DDXX XEEAA
Poetic Form
Metre 10001101 10111110 10110011 11101001111 111111101 1011111111 0100101101 1111111 1101101111 01011101 111111111 1110111 111 11011001 11111 1101011010001101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 599
Words 117
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 3, 4, 5
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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Written on September 22, 2021

Submitted by mikevecc38 on September 22, 2021

Modified by mikevecc38 on September 23, 2021

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Michael Anthony Vecchio jr

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