Analysis of Checklist February 23
1)Isn’t darning thread … just “thread”?
2)I can’t respond; working hours.
3)But conversation will continue in my head as if we were face to face; I will reply to you and there will be private jokes invented, discovered.
4)Refocus on the task ahead;
5)Have I taken care of every detail?
6)Will there be a guest?
7)I reneged on my promise to her. There is no confirmation.
8)I scramble to catch up
9)And find I am already there. Work done except
10)For removing one location. I call …
11)For everything I have touched today explodes into impossibilities,
12)Into darned pens and darned pins to be picked up by bleeding fingertips.
13)My drawer & hooks have been sabotaged. I need a new place to hang my six ears.
14)Without thinking I kill a remaining ant with a fingertip, mixing my blood, ant’s blood - releasing a crushed strawberry scent.
15)Yesterday my desk and counters were a swarm
16)But I sent them packed with poison to the nest; little sleepers, no doubt greeted with joy upon their return to the hearth.
17)Yesterday I let them live, to carry my duplicitous feast.
18)The deed is done. No need for an Adam & Eve;
19)There’s no Garden here. Only knowledge
20)And doubt. And recrimination. And picking at threads.
21)And time is counting down.
22)I cannot decide on what to eat but must leave anyways
23)And refocus … time is counting down. Other sessions move closer
24)So I go down the list. Open the website. Search the date, Open the settings. Change the date. Validate – oh, don’t forget to validate.
25)Fridays move to Thursdays - or is it the other way around? Has Thursdays supplanted Fridays?
26)Oh, don’t forget to validate
27)Or we shall have to mend again.
28)My folder contains staples & paperclips;
29)Staples for the past (I cannot effect it).
30)Paper clips for the mutable.
31)I must leave – eat, run errands, turn on equipment, tap folders filled with staples & paper clips on the tables;
32)There must be a place to buy darned thread when it’s only forty- two
33)Degrees.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 11011010 1010101001111101111101110111101010010 01010101 11101110001 11101 101111010111010 110111 011101011101 1010101011 1101110101011 0111011111111010 11111101101111111 01101100101101010111101001101 1011010001 11111110101101011101101101101 101111110101001 01111111101 111011010 010001001011 011101 1101111111110 0010111011010110 11110110011011001010110011011100 10111011101010111001010 11011100 11111101 11001101 10101110011 10110100 11111101101011011101011010 1110111111110101 01 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 2,012 |
Words | 348 |
Sentences | 33 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 33 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 47 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 1,552 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 348 |
About this poem
Published on We Are 50 Poems online journal.
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Written on February 23, 2012
Submitted by Ariel on September 20, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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