Analysis of A.D.H.D

Ashley Totty 1989 (Indiana)



So many T.V's fill my mental space
Thought's that cant be erased
Situation and task at hand
Impulsive action and pacing I cant stand
Completed tasks T.V's fade
Distraction lose of focus my mind race
Sleepless night T.V's wont shut off
No control of my mental space im lost
Medication is not the answer
Im not my own self when subdued
To be forced i refuse
Control of my character you cant have
ADHD is part of my life except me as i am


Scheme ABCCDAEFGHIJK
Poetic Form
Metre 110111101 111101 0100111 01010010111 010111 0101110111 1011111 1011110111 01011010 11111101 111101 0111100111 111111011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 424
Words 87
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 345
Words per stanza (avg) 84

About this poem

Mind old an ADHD person

Font size:
 

Written on April 12, 2019

Submitted by tottyashley1989 on September 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

27 sec read
5

Ashley Totty

I'm a mother of 3 I do not have a relationship with my mother but my children has one with me more…

All Ashley Totty poems | Ashley Totty Books

1 fan

Discuss this Ashley Totty poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "A.D.H.D" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 1 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/109542/a.d.h.d>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Ashley Totty

    »

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    30
    days
    10
    hours
    38
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    A poem in which the first letters of each line spell a word is called _______.
    A a haiku
    B an ode
    C a sestina
    D an acrostic