Analysis of If You Break.



Hands weave webs of many colours,
as tiny souls are thrown from firey windows.
Creeping skin of soot sheets the face,
when petols of dust are musked in disgrace.
Emerging from clouds tears eyes wide open, so that they can scream with all that is left of their very beings.
Washing your body is like the the return of 2,996 angels into heaven.


Scheme AAAAAB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 1101111110 10111101 111111001 01011111101111111111111010 101101100011100110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 338
Words 64
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 45
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 272
Words per stanza (avg) 63

About this poem

A photograph allows the soul to look at the body objectively.

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Written on October 14, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on September 14, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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