Analysis of If this World were Mine....baby
Dontay Anderson jr 2003
The world would be yours. I can never leave thee. Nevertheless, you would certainly leave me. I smile as I walk beside the horizon. I look over the dead land and the bloody seas. I’m a strange man....that’s what it seems. I search for my heart. ‘‘Baby, ‘O Please, Give it Back!” I’m left still chasing her. And she’s still running from my ‘‘love’’, not ‘‘me.’’ I get down on my burning knees. Why would she leave? Doth she not see? That my love is so much of an actual dream.....a dream only I can expose her to see. If this World were Mine i’d make every flower possess her beauty. I’d make every tree take her shape. I’d give the Nature her smell. I’d make the sky go by her mood. Forever shall she be happy. I’d make Earth beautiful again. She’s my pretty loving baby. Keep on loving me baby. I need you. Loving me the way, God loves his creations. The world would be yours.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 0111111101100111100111111101001011100110010110111111111110111111111000111011111111111011111111111111111100111011010111110111100100101011100110111010011101110101011110111100011110101011101101111010111101001111 |
Characters | 921 |
Words | 172 |
Sentences | 27 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 1 |
Lines Amount | 1 |
Letters per line (avg) | 649 |
Words per line (avg) | 168 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 649 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 168 |
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