Analysis of If this World were Mine....baby



The world would be yours. I can never leave thee. Nevertheless, you would certainly leave me. I smile as I walk beside the horizon. I look over the dead land and the bloody seas. I’m a strange man....that’s what it seems. I search for my heart. ‘‘Baby, ‘O Please, Give it Back!” I’m left still chasing her. And she’s still running from my ‘‘love’’, not ‘‘me.’’ I get down on my burning knees. Why would she leave? Doth she not see? That my love is so much of an actual dream.....a dream only I can expose her to see. If this World were Mine i’d make every flower possess her beauty. I’d make every tree take her shape. I’d give the Nature her smell. I’d make the sky go by her mood. Forever shall she be happy. I’d make Earth beautiful again. She’s my pretty loving baby. Keep on loving me baby. I need you. Loving me the way, God loves his creations. The world would be yours.


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Characters 921
Words 172
Sentences 27
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 649
Words per line (avg) 168
Letters per stanza (avg) 649
Words per stanza (avg) 168
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Submitted by DontayAjr on September 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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