Analysis of Shade of mine.



Shade of mine’s leaving me slowly like a snake
On dark asphalt she’s dancing in blue
With a kiss, with a joke, by unnoticeable way
How can I poison her for adieu?

This is me, who has taught you believe other’s dance
Say no words after going away.
I’m agree to dust grim, cause it’s made from the ash
But don’t move and stay here with me for this day.


Scheme XABA XBXB
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 11110110101 11111001 101101111 111100101 111111101101 111101001 101111111101 11101111111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 355
Words 70
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 134
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Submitted by Radocheva on September 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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