Analysis of Innocence



a dirty, rusted blade stabs me
like smearing feces on a newborn baby
my fragile teddy bear shatters
as nonsensical words and lights scatter
my memory fades away
as the crimson surrounds me
as this experience fades away
i just wanted to say,
that although this pain is temporary
my story is not finished.


Scheme AABCDADDAE
Poetic Form Etheree  (20%)
Metre 01010111 1101101010 11010110 1010010110 1100101 1010011 110100101 111011 11111100 1101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 294
Words 54
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 247
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Written on August 22, 2021

Submitted by beansonmyjeans8 on August 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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