Analysis of Immortal is mirage..
Traumatised 'n' weeping eyes; once they were mine,
Now only to console our souls...lay those glittering memories.
Tragically! they vanished or my search is deine.
And now: where do we go with our incomplete stories?
Someone happily sighed, worked hard for years...
But destined are also tears, all we do is fear;
Then we gaze: for what were all those efforts?
Don't break to immaculate, it hurts 'particularly'
Neither past nor future will favour, its breaks early.
Immortal is everything? It's a mirage merely.
People would sense real when it hurts severely.
Love is how you stay alive, even after you are gone....
Memories live, not enemies! My Lord...
Care wins heart, pride not might....
Live the moments, don't know which would be the last sight.....
Scheme | ABABXXX CCCCXX DD |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (27%) |
Metre | 111011101 1101101011100100 10011011111 01111111000110 110011111 110110111111 1111101110 1110100111000 101110111110 010110100110 10111111010 11111011010111 1001110011 111111 101011111011 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 741 |
Words | 127 |
Sentences | 16 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 7, 6, 2 |
Lines Amount | 15 |
Letters per line (avg) | 39 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 193 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 42 |
About this poem
With the technology driven world we have forgot to value human emotions, relationships and bonds. We lead a very sophisticated life where we keep running chasing and stretching in different spheres of field for the success wealth and a comfortable lifestyle. We could live the absolute beauty of life and nature if you just sit back few moments and cherish how happy life actually is.
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Written on August 18, 2021
Submitted by AishwaryaTiwari on August 22, 2021
Modified by AishwaryaTiwari on August 22, 2021
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