Analysis of She

Zana 2003 (NY)



She is the smile on my face
The beauty of my spirit
The moon at my nights
The sun on my days
Yes it’s she
The love of my life

I love her more than she knows
And care for her more than she realize
I would be devastated if i know
She is in love with another boy

She will break my heart peacefully
But just a half of it eventually
Cause a half will always remain
To love her like she is the main

She doesn’t know if i love her
And she thinks i am a friend of her
She doesn’t see it cause I don’t say it
She doesn’t feel it cause I don’t show it

I adore her the most
That’s why I don’t know the cost
She is the girl of my life
And without her i just dive

In my dreams i see her
But in the reality i miss her
I am scared to fall
But if it is for her i would love to fall

And when I finally die
And inside the grave i lie
Come and say it’s you i love
Even if it’s you that I can’t have

Even if my body died hopefully in peace
And my heart will be hold in one piece
The piece that your love will hold
And to that love my heart has been sold

I was always asked if she is the one
And I always said she is the only one
It has been a pleasure your love
Though i didn’t get to have

Whenever i look at your eyes
I smile and say what is the price
For you to look at me in a way
That can always make my day

There are two things about my goodbye
And i will really hate them when i die
I don’t forget someone i loved by chance
And I don’t forgive someone i hated once

I know i can not forget you
But what can i hate about you
You were the dream in my reality
But i was just a reality in your dreaming city

The moon goes down anyway
But u went too far away
I try to look at the moon every night
Cause it feels like i am holding u so tight

It wasn’t ur beauty that attracted me
It was your look that surprised me
They say always look at the eyes
Cause they don’t change till u die

Maybe we are not supposed to feel the same
But who said we should be lame
Cause i love u and u know it
So give some love or at least show it

You may not see what i am doing
But I can’t really do the showing
Cause a man keeps it under the dark
To avoid playing with the sharks


Scheme XXXXAB XCXX AADD EEFF XXBX EEGG HHIJ KKLL MMIJ CXNN HHXX OOAA NNPP AACH QQFF RRXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111 0101110 01111 01111 111 01111 1101111 011011110 111100111 110110101 11111100 11011101000 1011101 11011101 1111110 011110110 111111111 111111111 101001 1111101 1101111 0010111 011110 10010110 11111 11111011111 0111001 0010111 1011111 101111111 101110110001 011111011 0111111 011111111 111111101 0111110101 11101011 111111 01011111 11011101 111111001 111111 11110111 0111011111 110111111 0110111101 11111011 11111011 10010110 1111010011010 011110 1111101 11111011001 11111110111 1111010101 11111011 1111101 1111111 10111011101 1111111 11110111 111111111 111111110 111101010 101111001 10110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,116
Words 476
Sentences 1
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 66
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

A little bit of a crush that i had back on the days, about a girl who meant almost everything to me.

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Submitted by zanaahmedsalih13 on August 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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