Analysis of Who saved who?



I was born in a Amish Puppy Mill Far Away
As soon as I could open my eyes and see
I saw for the first time my mom and family
And suddenly as I was getting older
They all started to go away
Wondering and dreaming will it be me next
All I wanted was a family of my own
Will they love me hug and kiss me love me
This would be a dream come true
Will I be a show dog or a companion
Can I have free run of my new home
Beautiful thoughts going on vacation free run
Running in the grass car rides beach time lakes
Pounding my feet on the ocean sand and water
Oh can I help my owner if she is old
Can I alert my mom when my dad falls
Will I be moms ears to hear for her
I long for this day
Woken up by a strange man putting me in a van
It’s a long trip feels like it is taking forever
To my surprise I was brought to a dog store
Every day I looked at the people not one looked back
Why doesn’t anyone look at me or want me
One day at 6 months of age a older woman fell in love with me
She bought me a lot of nice things
The whole way home she held me next to her heart petting kissing me
My dream came true
Mom’s dream came true
She sleeps with me and always says
Spencer who saved who? I know that you saved me! My handsome Lassie look alike!


Scheme ABBCADEBFGHGICJKCALCMNBBOBFFPQ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 1110010101101 11111101101 111011110100 01001111010 11101101 10001011111 111010100111 1111101111 1110111 11101110010 111111111 100110101011 1000111111 101110101010 11111101111 1101111111 111111110 11111 1011011101001 1011111110010 11011111011 10011110101111 1110111111 1111110101010111 11101111 0111111110110101 1111 1111 1111011 1011111111111010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,228
Words 271
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 958
Words per stanza (avg) 271

About this poem

Poem about a puppy looking for love! And a elderly woman who wanted a Shetland Sheepdog puppy always!

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Written on September 12, 2021

Submitted by cjcmm5x on August 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:21 min read
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Nancy Epps

Mother of 6 grandma of 1 wife chaplain and minister and saving best for last Spencer! My best friend and my dream come true my Shelty! more…

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