Analysis of Whine Made From Ripened Gripes



More are heard to whine these days.
By decisions they have made.
And unprepared to accept disappointment.
To then begin to gripe about this and that.
With a doing this to believe,
Someone else...
Should be held accountable,
For actions taken without asking anyone...
What would they do,
In a situation to make...
Generically hypothetical.
Avoiding the chance to become mistaken,
As one trying to find reason and rhythm...
To convince,
Their 'whine' to make...
Had been aged,
From vintaged ripened 'gripes'!


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJGHKLJMN
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1010111 001101010 11011101101 10101101 11 1110100 11010011010 1111 0001011 01000100 01001101010 11101110010 101 1111 111 11101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 490
Words 82
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 394
Words per stanza (avg) 82
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Submitted by lpahtillah on August 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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