Analysis of WING AND TONGUE



WING AND TONGUE

K R Balakrishnan

That butterfly on musical wings
Fluttering in a free sky
Once made into the hearts
Of  crowds jostling
Singing a silent note ;
Sweet and swift circuit all around.

Its flow in the air
With poetic energy spread splendour ;
Stagnant minds could not adore,
They ran after it like unicorns
And at times like a battle array.

They talked in passive voice
Beating about the bushes
Forest dwellers sent arrows
Which retorted like boomerangs
They still were unaware
Of the beauty of that butterfly.

In bio-diversities
That butterfly survived
In solemn nights it  became
A moth to face artificial lights, to die.

I don’t know where it fell
With damaged wings and tongue
Hope it will return
With softened temper
In more sharpened paths.


Scheme A B CDXXXX EEXCX XXXCED CXXD XABXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101 111 11011001 1000011 110101 11100 100101 10110101 11001 101010011 1011101 1110111 011101001 110101 1001010 1010110 101011 11001 10101110 011 11001 0101101 0111010111 111111 110101 11101 11010 01101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 877
Words 132
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 6, 5, 6, 4, 5
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 88
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted by krbalakrishnan on July 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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