Analysis of Humbly Proud



What causes quarrels and fights,
That your passions are at war;
While causing sleepless nights,
Regardless, if near or far.

You desire but have not,
So you murder to obtain;
Coveting what you have sought,
Not satisfied to retain.

You ask and do not receive,
Because you are asking wrong;
Your passions try to deceive,
Because your desires long.

You adulterous people,
Knowing not of friendship here;
Being foe to the Gospel,
In God of having no fear.

Do you think Scripture is vain?
Jealous over the Spirit;
The lusting over His reign,
Watching within your merit.

But He is giving you grace,
As God opposes the proud;
The humble He does embrace,
While His grace is allowed.

Submit yourself to the Lord,
Resist the devil within;
To remain in one accord,
Which will free you from the sin.

If you draw near to the Lord,
God will draw nearer to you;
He will bless with a reward,
When purified hearts are true.

Let your laughter rid mourning,
As your joy abolish gloom;
Worship God for adorning,
That eliminates the doom.

Humble yourself before God,
And He will glorify you;
When you give honor and laud,
If sincerity is true.

Copyright © 2021 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme AXAX XBXB CDCD EXEX BFBF GHGH IJIJ IKIK LMLM XKXK X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101001 1110111 110101 0101111 1010111 1110101 11111 110101 1101101 0111101 1101101 0110101 1010010 1011101 1011010 0111011 1111011 1010010 0101011 1001110 1111011 1101001 0101101 111101 0101101 0101001 1010101 1111101 1111101 1111011 1111001 110111 1110110 1110101 1011010 101001 1001011 011101 1111001 1010011 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,122
Words 206
Sentences 12
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 41
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 19

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Warning Against Worldliness James 4:1–10

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Written on July 26, 2021

Submitted by richards.77936 on July 25, 2021

Modified on March 15, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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