Analysis of The Universe Unfolded



The fiery crystals,
Behind the secondary eclipse,
Ancient blooms in the dark,
covered in a sapphire apocalypse.

shadows hidden in sacred chambers,
beneath the arches of the parallel unknown,
flashing hypnotic secrecies,
surfing the vast oceans alone.

silent symphonies drifting through the air,
chanting the melody of love,
echoing through selfish hearts,
slashing the hatred above.

peaceful wars dreaming through the night,
striking the moral rage,
blunt ideas flowing through your minds,
trapped in an imperial cage.


Scheme ABXB XCAC XDXD XEXE
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 010010 01010001 101001 1000100010 11001010 01010101001 100101 10011001 1010010101 10010011 1001101 1001001 10110101 100101 101010111 10101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 503
Words 77
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Written on June 01, 2020

Submitted by Rizeria on July 20, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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