Analysis of Attachment

Devasish Malla. 1999 (Nepal)



Getting attached to anything makes you weak
Your mind only seems to seek
Oh how you wish your mind to be meek
But nothing works when you are sick.
Sick for attention
Sick for love
Oh how I wish I could raise above
From this desperate seeking of love
All I ask from you is that scared feeling
Can you not see that my heart is bleeding.
For you, oh for you it's pleading
Oh if only you could feel my heeding
Then only my efforts to get to you would not be so misleading.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1001110111 1110111 111111111 11011111 11010 111 111111101 11101011 1111111110 1111111110 11111110 1110111110 11011011111111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 456
Words 95
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 369
Words per stanza (avg) 95

About this poem

One sided love is a hard thing to deal with. I am going through it now and I guess you all have gone through it at some point of your life.

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Submitted by devasishmalla1010 on July 17, 2021

Modified on March 26, 2023

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