Analysis of the pain of parting

Jaie Naik 1981 (Mumbai)



The Pain of Parting
At some point of time we all have suffered
the pain of parting.
Today me head is heavy
My heart is sinking
The body is almost fainting
The beautiful moments spent together
seems like a soothing painting
The fear of losing
emotions oozing
Everything is so haunting
To bid goodbye
To stand thereby
seems really daunting
Hope is all that remain
till we meet again
For now, its a painful parting


Scheme AbAcaadaaaaeeafga
Poetic Form
Metre 01110 1111111110 01110 0111110 11110 0101110 0100101010 1101010 01110 01010 101110 111 1111 11010 111101 11101 11101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 398
Words 75
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 335
Words per stanza (avg) 75
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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