Analysis of WHEN THE DREAMER DIED



If the Dreamer were alive today
He’d dream of a free Tibet,
He’d tell the Chinese to, ‘Get the Hell on out!’
And we’d follow without regret.

But the Dreamer died fifty years ago
And his dream of hope died too,
So no-one stands up to Beijing
Saying, ‘What the Hell can we do?’

When the Dreamer died truth died too
At least that’s the way it seems,
So the Beijing nightmare goes ever on
And Tibetans can only dream.

They dream of a time when freedom
Is a Given, not like it is now,
When they don’t have to wonder
                    if freedom will ever come
And they don’t have to wonder how.

But dreams of hope are sinking fast
Like the sun in the evening sky,
And just as the Dreamer died years ago
Will Tibetan dreams also die?

Is there a future still for justice
Or is injustice now in command?
Will we one day have to go to war,
So we can liberate the Tibetans?

Is freedom a forlorn dream
Of a future, we will never see,
Can Tibet ever get independence
From the control of the Chinese?

Is injustice now in control?
So a war with China is the only hope?
Or will the Chinese step back a bit
To give justice much greater scope?

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXA BCXC CXXD EFXEF XGBG XXXX DXXX XHXH XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 101000101 1110101 11001110111 01100101 1010110101 0111111 1111111 10101111 10101111 1110111 10111101 00101101 11101110 101011111 1111110 1101101 01111101 11111101 10100101 0110101101 10101101 110101110 110101001 111111111 111100010 1100011 101011101 101101010 10011001 10101001 10111010101 110011101 11101101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,186
Words 231
Sentences 13
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

About the USA in the 1960s and Tibet today.

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Written on 2008

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 09, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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