Analysis of You are the light.

Mitchel Fletcher 1982 (Marion, Ky)



You are the light that brightens up my day,
I cry and sob when you are away.

I lay awake all night thinking of you,
and wake up the next day praying to God in my sleep that it will be with you.

I open my eyes to see,
and wonder when will it be.

I ask God to please show me a sign,
then I fall to my knees and start to whine.

I just wish that the day would hurry up and come,
the day when we will become one.

I know in my heart we will stay,
because you are the light that brightens up my day.


Scheme AA BB CC DD XX AA
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1101110111 110111101 1101111011 0110111011011111111 1101111 0101111 111111101 1111110111 111101110101 01111011 11011111 011101110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 482
Words 110
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

Wrote this poem when I was 18 or 19 it’s the only one of many I wrote and actually remember the words to.

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Written on March 15, 1999

Submitted by newdemon on July 06, 2021

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Mitchel Fletcher

Born in Marion, Ky lived there 30 years. more…

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