Analysis of The Sweet smile

Hiran Rajbanshi 2003 (Jhapa)



Whenever I close my eyes
The sweet smile
Suddenly appears on my face.
Specially imagining you and me.

You and I will go
To a place that may be Miles away.
As we both feel happiness
We may never get to heaven.
But at least we can try.

You know everyone has a song
That belongs to their own
It's like a star line of our life.
That will go on.

And the songs that I sing
It belongs to you and me.
You are the rhythm and tune of this song.
I want to sing with you
And feel the moments if each day.

Whenever I close my eyes
The sweet smile Suddenly on my face
Specially imagining you and me.


Scheme AxbC xdxxx exxx xcexd AbC
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111 011 10001111 1000100101 10111 101111101 1111100 11101110 111111 1110101 101111 110111101 1111 001111 1011101 1101001111 111111 01010111 0101111 011100111 1000100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 565
Words 122
Sentences 11
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 5, 3
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 90
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

The sweet smile, this poem explain about the smile that we see on our partner when we loved het too much.

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Submitted by rajbanshihiran9 on June 27, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hiran Rajbanshi

I am from Nepal. And My name is Hiran Rajbanshi or you can call me Bindas Rajbanshi too. I am a student of IT. Studying at Devi. ma.vi. Birtamode. more…

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