Analysis of Help

Nicolaas Goosen 2005 (Cape Town, South Africa)



These words I write
They do not help
My feelings
Still maintain their place

Ever deeper
In my heart -
A black hole
From which
Nothing escapes

My mind, I feel
Is leaving me
Me just stuck here
This hopeless space


Scheme XXXA XXXXX XXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1111 110 10111 1010 011 011 11 1001 1111 1101 1111 1101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 208
Words 41
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted on June 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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