Analysis of HE TOUCH ME ON MY BIRTHDAY

reebz 2002 (karachi)



HE TOUCH ME ON MY BIRTHDAY

It is my birthday                                                                                                                    
                                                                                                               Drops of rain are on the way

He come near to me and say                                                                                                              
                                                                                                      Sweetie lets try something new to play

He then touch my legs but I get away                                                                                                                
                                                                                                                I get scare and run to gateway

He do worst with me without any delay
                                                                                                                Nobody listen to me that day

Thats why I am in depression till today
                                                                                                      He gift me the worst memory on my birthday

Anonymous
                                                              (voice of every victim)


Scheme A AA AA AA AA AA XX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 1111 1111101 1111101 101110111 1111111101 1110111 11111011001 1101111 11110010101 11101100111 0100 1110010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,416
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

This poem is about the worst reality of our society.It is based on child rape story done by her own relative.I have written this poem usind approriate words . It s for awareness purpose .

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Written on June 22, 2021

Submitted by reebz26 on June 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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I am teenager and beginner poet. i usually like to write about realities and sensitive topics it is my first work. more…

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