Analysis of Decayed Wings



He asked me if it hurt when I fell from heaven
And it wasn't a charming question
My wings were set ablaze
As I crashed through the Earth's atmosphere
Each feather plucked with painstaking vulgarity
I grasped at moons and galaxies
In a desperate attempt
To slow my blazing descent
And the burns still smoke
My scarred back still smouldering
There went my ignorant purity
As a gritty harsh reality was thrust upon me

"You should know.
You pushed me."


Scheme AAXXBXXXCCBB XB
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111110 011001010 110101 11110110 11011100100 11110100 001001 1111001 00111 11111 111100100 101011011011 111 111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 447
Words 82
Sentences 3
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 186
Words per stanza (avg) 40
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Submitted by Askew on June 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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