Analysis of Anxious future



If the past were air i blow away
With a vigor to be free
Life is like a canoe
On bloody lakes of roaring seas
It should stain
Life could be a mist racing along
Tainting waves
Casterated hopes and ceased passion
I chase from the torrents with a speed
Of spinning anxiety of hopelessness
All i see is the darkness spiking forth
Could there be any hope
To rest my dreams
Atlest for a day.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101011101 1010111 111001 11011101 111 111011001 101 110110 111010101 11001001100 1111010101 111101 1111 1101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 374
Words 76
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 309
Words per stanza (avg) 76

About this poem

The poem is an expression of the frustration of a dream pursuerer whose efforts always ran null of result prior to his expectations.

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Submitted by Coachsuccess on June 11, 2021

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Tahiru Jonah Nasara (Success)

I am a stunt beliver from Ghana. A poet, blogger, fiction and non-fiction writer and a lyricist. more…

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