Analysis of My love, you consume my every breath
Holly Flame Maxey 1976 (baltimore)
I offer you my complete devotion
My heart, mind, and soul honor your aura
I am entranced by the entrance way to your soul
My life is enriched when I think about all the ways
You shine and bring light to my life
My days pass by effortlessly
Inspiration comes to me in dewdrops
These innate desires require no response
They exist naturally, only to dance with the butterflies
That have taken residency in the deepest parts of my existence
Thinking about you my love
Is no longer an option, it is my very breath
My complete knowledge of existence
How can I live without breathing?
How can I breathe without the knowledge of
The awesome existential “ you”
Scheme | X X X A X X A X X B C X B X C X |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1101101010 1110110110 110110101111 1110111101101 11011111 11111000 01011101 10101010101 101100010111010 111010000010111010 1001111 1110110111101 101101010 11110110 1111010101 010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 666 |
Words | 121 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 16 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 33 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 7 |
About this poem
Every day I try to tell him the depth of my emotions I will continue to try I pray that one day we will be together heart, body, mind, and soul
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