Analysis of Twilight

Edwin James Brady 1869 (Carcoar, New South Wales) – 1952 (Pambula, New South Wales)



When a heavy surf is droning

In the twilight on the bar;
When our Mother Sea is crooning

Her quaint cradle-song afar;

When the wild black swans are lining
To some still, remote lagoon;

And above the headland, shining,
Hangs a quiet, crescent moon;

When the panoply, the splendor

Of the tropic sunset dies, —
Then my Fancy turns to tender

Dreams beneath the queenly skies.

Dear-loved Loadstone of my longing.
Fair, fond Woman of my heart!

When the twilight thoughts are thronging.
Art thou dreaming, too, apart?

Yes, my Spirit echoes truly;

'Circling seas shall, with the tide.
Pulse on either shore of Thule,

In the Dream Beatified.

'Surely as the mystic Crescent
Silvers now a garden fair,
Will the shining, white, liquescent
Light of Love burn also there!**

So I mourn not that the splendor
Of the dead Day lies in pall.

When the Night her brooding, tender
Wings of fantasy lets fall.

In the dusk Tm sitting, building
Tall cloud-castles by the sea ;

In the dusk my Love is gilding
Castles fair for her and me.


Scheme A BA B AC AC D ED E AF AF G HG H XIFI DX DX AG AG
Poetic Form
Metre 10101110 001101 110101110 0110101 10111110 1110101 0010110 1010101 10100010 101011 11101110 101011 1111110 1110111 101111 1110101 11101010 10011101 1110111 001010 10101010 1010101 101011 1111101 11111010 1011101 10101010 1110011 00111010 1110101 00111110 1011001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,021
Words 182
Sentences 12
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 1, 4, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 44
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Edwin James Brady

E. J. (Edwin James) Brady was an Australian journalist and poet. more…

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