Analysis of My wish

Seema Tabassum 1974 (Hyderabad)



I wish to catch a qandeel
Put it inside my list of joy
Then as soon as I open my eyes
I would liberate my deepest joy
Into your lap.my dear boy!
Now do I get a Hi:


Scheme ABCBBD
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11011111 111111011 11101101 011111 111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 158
Words 39
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6
Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 38
Font size:
 

Submitted by aliseema10 on May 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

11 sec read
9

Seema Tabassum

I live in Islamabad.I love poetry. more…

All Seema Tabassum poems | Seema Tabassum Books

3 fans

Discuss this Seema Tabassum poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "My wish" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 17 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/100375/my-wish>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    More poems by

    Seema Tabassum

    »

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    14
    days
    5
    hours
    48
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem One Art?
    A E. E. Cummings
    B Sylvia Plath
    C Elizabeth Bishop
    D Elizabeth Barrett Browning