Analysis of Dawn



You are so lovely, they say
You always come with a circular
     lantern
Though how it looks I can’t say
Because I am always asleep
     seeing none!

When you start your wonderful
     entry
The birds always dance and sing
     with merry
The swallows open their beaks
     and twitter
While the doves coo lovelily and
     flutter

But I have a qualm with you
I have to say that you are not
     fair
Because you always come when all
Children are asleep but a few
And the honor to inaugurate a new day
You always don’t share

When you start a new day
It is only because you hurt the
     darkness and it flees
You always lender their leader the moon
Useless as you smite ‘em and slay
Chasing them to hide in closed houses
     and in the shadows

Can’t you have mercy???

© GIDRAF MWANGI


Scheme ABXAXX XCXCABXB DXEXDAE AXXXAXX C X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 1111011 11110100 10 1111111 0111101 101 1111100 10 011101 110 0101011 010 101110 10 1110111 11111111 1 0111111 10101101 001010100011 1111 111011 111001110 10011 111011001 10111101 101110110 0001 11110 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 768
Words 144
Sentences 3
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 6, 8, 7, 7, 1, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted by GIDRAF on May 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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