jonsaviours

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jonsaviours
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Pacifist/Poet. Philosophy lover. I find joy in expressing myself through poems and stories. Writing is not just a hobby; it is my way of sharing my thoughts and emotions with the world. It is a form of self-expression that has the potential to inspire, inform, and provoke thought. I particularly enjoy the art of world building, creating rich and immersive settings where stories can come to life. from Nigeria

  March 2024     2 hours ago

Submitted Poems 1 total

Narcissus

Narcissus

You are the boy who swallowed a mirror and now
light pours from your mouth when you speak. I want
to cup my hands around your face, catch the fragments
of your kaleidoscope eyes. You say look at me and I do,
I do, until my retinas...

by Jon Saviours

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Your poem is vivid with raw emotional honesty that marks poet like Anne Sexton.
Well done.

10 days ago

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Beautiful

10 days ago

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I loved reading this poem. The message, theme and form was incredible.

10 days ago

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thank you. I voted for the summer lady. It's a very nice poem.

11 days ago

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Thank you Betsy, I'm glad you liked it.

11 days ago

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"The best choice is be kind" really resonates with me
It echoes "Primum non nocere" Do no harm..

Congrats by the way.

11 days ago

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Congratulations.. Your poem's beautiful, the world needs more hope.

11 days ago

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Thank you.. I appreciate it.

11 days ago

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thank very much

11 days ago

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Fancy the touch of medieval fantasy. Your poem is a beautiful and vivid exploration of classical romance.
The use of consistent rhyme and meter is noteworthy and lyrical.
Will he ever find what he lost?
Well done 

11 days ago

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unfortunately Keats died in Rome 203 years ago.

22 days ago

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I've payed the fee but I haven't gotten any response yet about the status of my submission.
How long does it take?

1 month ago

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cherish those precious moments of Innocence

1 month ago

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This is a beautiful poem
I love how it effectively captures the emotions, and the deeper themes associated with loss and remembrance.
My condolences.

1 month ago

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