PWRBTTM_0X45
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Not looking exposure nor commentary on how to improve, my poetry is shite and is what it is, just wanted to put it somewhere so I could share it.

Joined: March 2021 Last seen: 3 years ago

Submitted Poems 3 total

War She’s elegant, she’s fast, she’s a beautiful ride, When I mount her, saddle up, I feel alive, how fast we ride, is for me to decide, Oh Beatrix, you are the girl for me, together rain, sleet or snow, never... – *by Mallaidh Nig-Uidhir*	22 Views added 3 years ago	Rating
6 Hard Months Standards slipping, potential fading, Concentration and motivation declined, I find myself surrounded, entombed by hateful voices, I cannot care and I cannot feel, I am trapped in a... – *by Mallaidh Nig-Uidhir*	5 Views added 3 years ago	Rating
Ride Sometimes we like people for what we see on the outside, the periphery person, the person at the gate, a gate which keeps us from the path to their inner being, we fall for their mask, we fall for an unrealistic expectation that we have, we ignore... – *by Mallaidh Nig-Uidhir*	9 Views added 3 years ago	Rating

She’s elegant, she’s fast, she’s a beautiful ride,
When I mount her, saddle up, I feel alive,
how fast we ride, is for me to decide,
Oh Beatrix, you are the girl for me,
together rain, sleet or snow, never...

– by Mallaidh Nig-Uidhir

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added 3 years ago

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6 Hard Months

Standards slipping, potential fading,
Concentration and motivation declined,
I find myself surrounded, entombed by hateful voices,
I cannot care and I cannot feel, I am trapped in a...

– by Mallaidh Nig-Uidhir

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added 3 years ago

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Ride

Sometimes we like people for what we see on the outside,
the periphery person, the person at the gate,
a gate which keeps us from the path to their inner being,
we fall for their mask,
we fall for an unrealistic expectation that we have,
we ignore...

– by Mallaidh Nig-Uidhir

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added 3 years ago

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