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All Good

레나미 2003 (Bali)

The sky was dark blue,
wearing stars as earrings,
and a perfectly round yellowish-white necklace
Beneath it; was us

We were unsure of the morning,
we were afraid of the warmth
"All good", you said
As you lead us east

It was no longer dark,
when you welcomed the sun
"All good", I said
Before I drove back towards the moon
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Submitted by renami on April 28, 2021

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Scheme XXAA XXBX XXBX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 330
Words 63
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
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