No feeling left within



I have no feeling left in heart,
The pain has just surpassed all.
Have no feeling left within me,
It's all over right before my Sight.

The share of innocent blood,
Has triggered the fear and panic in me.
Love and hope have lost their meanings
But never stopped given up on situations.
Gazing on things dismay

I have lost all the joy of life,
I have lost it all to know.
Nothing is left to show
I am in a state of dilemma,
Where I don't know what will happen
Just some lost of thoughts within.

There is nothing that I feel in my heart.
There's not a way to celebrate.
My joy and everything just looks shattered,
Silently counting my tears,

Silently I cry out when no one is there.
A country that used to be Peaceful,
Now full with innocent blood share.
People that used to love,
Now don't bother to care anymore.

Times have changed so as the people.
Striving hard through the pain,
But the suffering just looks to be in Vain.
I am shattered to the core,
I am lost in life and thought somewhere.
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Submitted by Brown_Sketchys on January 15, 2021

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBX XBXXX XCCXXX AXXX DEDXF EGGFD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 965
Words 191
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 6, 4, 5, 5

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  • Belleta
    Return to your “Smart Hungry Candy” poem to get out of the doldrums. It’s a beautiful poem. You have a great talent that should sustain you.
    LikeReply 13 years ago

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