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Rhyme rhyme.

H. Lock

Eat cardboard.

No, really.

I used to do it when I was severely mentally ill and depressed as f*ck.

Fills you up, passes easily, and doesn’t make you fat.

Welcome to “ANOREXIA WHILST CHEWING”.

Nearly killed me, but I looked hot.

And that’s that.

About this poem

I just rhymed the same word. It’s like Bowie/Sabbath. Word.

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Submitted by Sleekwood on May 14, 2024

Modified by Sleekwood on May 17, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X A X X A
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 265
Words 56
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
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  • JdeLorenzo08
    JdeLorenzo08
    Prayers for you and glad you are working towards healing. Who ever created depression sucks. Nice piece!
    LikeReply14 days ago

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