Lost in life



Lost in life with so many emotions built inside

I have so many tears that I just want to cry, but I hold them inside

26 two heart surgeries and I’m still living in these Brooklyn streets

Trying to be a mother to my little brother build an empire and show him that I love them

Doctors telling me that I’ll be fine

Suffering seizures, that’s not what I call life

I don’t even smoke or either drink but when I’m on my meds I’m already feeling bent

All alone in this world trying to be a good girl

Trying to fight all the demons that keep surrounding me, lord just protect me and continue guiding me.

About this poem

I was only 26 when I found out I was suffering from epilepsy I wrote this once I got dignosed to create a song but noticed it’s more like a lyrical poem.

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Written on April 14, 2014

Submitted by Hazelmarie2024 on May 01, 2024

Modified by Hazelmarie2024 on May 01, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A X X X X X X X
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 617
Words 126
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Crystal m blas

Since a young girl I always was inspired to write weather it was poems or stories about any past experiences or what I would see in life myself hope it inspires you as much it inspires me to continue to write. Live learn laugh stay blessed more…

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