What more can I offer you?



What more can I offer you?

O,God I'll offer you,
With my tear drops
Which will be like garland
Of cristal pearls.

What more can I offer you,
when sorrow and pangs,
always lead me down
and my constant companions?

But I want your blessing
so that I can bear all these adversities
and can remember you
in every pros and cons.

I know if your blessing are with me,
I can cross this tumultuous ocean
and can reach to the shore of heaven.
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Submitted by swarupbhattacharya263 on April 16, 2024

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Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 3

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