A Piece of Me



When you speak down to me,
it cuts me in such a way.
Your words as clear as a bell.
Leaves me with nothing to say.
A piece of me slips away.

When you tear at my soul,
it is jealousy that I see.
Your fear of my carefree spirit
prevents you from understanding me.
A piece of me slips away.

When you scream at me
or even spit in my face.
For a simple disagreement
on how to keep my home space.
A piece of me slips away.

When you argue with me
because of our different views.
It leads me to believe
my thoughts are of no value.
A piece of me slips away.

When you raise your voice to me
it makes me feel small and weak.
Watching you stomp your feet
reminds me of an angry child.
A piece of me slips away.

When you choose to lift me up,
love and support me for who I am.
Than your kindness will fill my cup
and a new relationship can begin
A piece of me no longer slips away.

About this poem

A struggle for acceptance from my mother-in-law.

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Written on April 13, 2024

Submitted by mariej.15998 on April 13, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abxbB xaxaB acxcB axxxB axxxB dxdxb
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 875
Words 208
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5

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