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Perfect

Ravem Archer

My toes wiggle through the soil
The flowers smell divine
The air is kindly blowing
The sun is shining bright
My long white gown is flowing
The hair is all over my face
I feel like a little girl
Catch me if you can
Running and laughing loudly
While I feel my very best
In nature I am never lonely
The trees are my dear friends
Animals nod and communicate
Happy tears roll down my face
I feel light and amazing
What a perfect day.

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Submitted by Ravenarcher on February 03, 2024

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Scheme ABCDCEFGHIHJKECL
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 441
Words 89
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
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  • davidb
    davidb
    Very nice text!
    LikeReply2 months ago

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