Desaparecido de mi vista

Inez Amarillas 2022 (Culiacan)



Porque se fueron casi al mismo tiempo.
La vida es muy frágil.
Porque los dos? Me siento como un tempo.
Ya nada es fácil.

Los amare siempre
Mi alma está vacía y oscura sin ustedes.
Llegarán hasta mi quiebre.
Dios ayúdame a salir de estas redes.

Maldita muerte.
Porque me quitaste a los dos.
Jamas te daré mi suerte.
Eres mala, traicionera solo llegas y te los llevas a todos.

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Fallecieron mis amores.

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Written on January 10, 2024

Submitted by inez.amarillas on January 10, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD EDED
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 384
Words 83
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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