My Mothers Passing.

Brenda Puente 1960 (Philadelphia, PA)

Today my mother passed, I felt as if I couldn’t breathe, she was my rock, my friend, my strength. My mother loved me and prayed for me who will pray for me now? I called her phone and no one answered she was really gone. I’d give anything to hear her voice, to hug her or just to share my day with her just  one more day! I close my eyes and try to visualize her face, I’m afraid to forget her smile. God help me remember her as I close my eyes and cry myself to sleep. I wish I had Just 1 more day!

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Today my mother passed, I felt as if I couldn’t breathe, so many emotions! I miss her so!

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Written on July 23, 2023

Submitted by Bpperez60 on July 23, 2023

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