What's in my Name



My mom said the saddest thing tonight
We talked about our last name and how we hated it
I said it was because the syllables were too harsh
It never flowed with my first
I kept in how in middle school
Kids would hear -berg and know "Jew"
And that was never safe
How it's been 13 years and the desire to hide from that pain never left
Instead I said I wanted her maiden name
But to drop the -men because it sounded better
She was quiet a minute before she replied
"My father did that on dinner reservations when I was a kid
Because it was never safe

About this poem

It's my first poem but the conversation has been playing in my head all night and I had to put it down in some way

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Written on January 03, 2023

Submitted by krromberg on January 03, 2023

Modified by krromberg on January 03, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 547
Words 110
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13

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