M i sick or what

[x] Ive been feeling better
[x] Not bcuz I'm okay wait a minute when was  i okay
[x] Shits happening here and there but i don't care
[x] They hurted me by saying they loved me deciding every path of my life wheather I liked it or not and at last when I cried cuz i don't like those path they just said it's the best path they choose that path cuz they loved me so much....but why I can't feel their warmness why this coldness surounds me am i sick or what...
[x] Again i m crying alone so miserable but i don't want them to see me so vulnerable now i tossed off on my tears and went from my dark space to brightness but...why this darkness is not leaving me afterall i m standing in the lights of stars am i sick or what...
[x] Now i know I'm as useless as they say as helpless as i m when i seee my reflection in the mirror it also taunts me back cuz all my life I was just a weakling but is it my fault cuz i was trembling even on thinking to hurt my loved ones people say ur shadow will always be with you in the thick and thin of ur/the life but wait a minute why is there no reflection of mine that reflections which taunts me sharp why my shadow is the one who's swallowing me into that dark oh! Now i know i was no moree and after all of this i was laughing like a pshyco now people sayin m i sick or what.....

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Written on October 30, 2022

Submitted by Pratimasinghsss1264949462 on October 30, 2022

Modified on May 02, 2023

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Shri Singh

Usually I like to read many novels and books and they made me realize different aspects of life which are greatly relateble to mine life those sad, depressing past which are really hard to ignore or forgot cuz they were all real and those things made me to represent it in those poems I wrote... more…

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