Untitled 1

I would like to taste that inner innocents that was never tainted from the others.
You and I are like allies, but our hearts are close like brothers. Intimacy is what I seek...No sex involved, just that spiritual connection that leads to a mental erection until our souls evolve. You have no idea who you're talking to...better yet, you have no idea what you've gotten yourself into.
My idea of a good time, is taking you on that lyrical ride. Inside your mind we travel In time, to find our hearts intertwined. Spiritual warfare is at hand! You're contaminated!...and I'm inebriated from the toxins that surrounds your soul. I smell the abomination of a situation you were facing, that made you lose control.
Open your eyes! Better yet, take control! If you grab that wheel, I'll grab that steel! just to show you how far one will go. I'll tear that back up if they act up, refrain from telling me lies. Because only real eyes realize real lies. You had no clue how I felt inside! Every time you cried! my heart dried! Erase that serpent data from your hard drive!
Ohh ohhhh, did you feel that love? It seems you've just been bit by that Sin Bug. I'm Sincere but I am Sin Seer. Your future gets revealed once I'm near. My pure diamond...that's more precious than gold. Enlighten me, on how you frighten thee with your soles. Every step you take, is a closer look towards your goals. I envy thee...even yearn for thee. So tell me...can you live without knowing me?

About this poem

This is a poem based on my feelings for a woman I've once knew.

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Written on October 11, 2016

Submitted by SinCityDaGreat on October 11, 2022

Modified on March 13, 2023

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Scheme ABCDE
Characters 1,466
Words 275
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5

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