what the fuck is wrong with you?”



you ask me what the f*ck is wrong with me
you
your time
your love
your warmth
I want one more moment
one more brief moment
where I can dream of you
where you are all mine
where you hold me and tell me
you love me
and how much I mean to you
I will admit it
I love
I love you
come back for one more moment
and free me

About this poem

A poem about love. Love that shatters you. Love that feels better than any love. Love that takes more than gives. Love that you want to be freed from.

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Written on March 01, 2022

Submitted by maiju_h on March 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFFBGAABHDBFA
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 315
Words 72
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17

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