Check on her

When the last time you checked up on her? Not after she hits you but before you start your day. Morning texts, midday check in, random
Ft and invites those things excite her. Oh the reward it brings to you for to check up on her. She does all she can, pic mail, date plans, pop up suggestions, motivations to get you through your day. Wondering why the effort has to be one sided, as she really is a blessing, wanting your attention and some form of adoration. She been solo for so long, so many reaching and she dubs them constantly thinking of you. She watches your adventures, never hating, just patient and still she can’t have you? Check on her, sometimes she needs a pick me up, she is strong but would love for you to notice the real her. Life sends you cycles, things you hope to change. Patterns you wish to break. She is ready for a better half. Those nights alone be cold and blurry, not because she is depressed, she not. She wants a shift in her atmosphere , rolling over to you, the one who understands her. One who is grateful for her, appreciates the sincerity in the affection she provides to you. It’s so much more than physical explosions she gives to you. She is peace of mind. Check on her. You been searching for her in all these fragments of broken packages. They seem cool but later their baggage pops up n sways you away. Once the smoke clears you sit and think about her. Her is me..I’ve been solid since day one. Untouchable to all as she been reserving herself simply for you.  Check on her.. what do you have to lose? With me it’s only gains.. why have you not checked on her? The future I can paint between us two is a symphony of question..why are you waiting?

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Written on December 13, 2021

Submitted by NeshIsher on December 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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