Utopia



Utopia…...
When I’m with you I feel my heart slowing
You brought your light into my darkness
I don’t what it is that I’m feeling
But I don’t want it to stop cuz I’m healing
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All I feel is warmth and comfort from you
But there’s also cuddles and kisses to
My heart doesn’t race or beat fast for you
My stomach doesn’t have butterflies to
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All I feel is safety and comfort
Yes, I know it quiet unusually for
Someone who is in love but not so sure
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I feel hazy when I’m all-around you
If I see you smile guess, what would I do
Yes, I would smile back, right back to you
No, its just not for you but for me to
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I know I may sound a bit weird
But all I can say to you right now
That I am most certainly in love with you…...
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You are the heart of my Utopia

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Young lesbian love...

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Written on November 27, 2021

Submitted by bpathamanthan on November 28, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCBB DDDD EFG DDDD HID A
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 821
Words 173
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

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  • bpathamanthan
    yes ive realised the mistakes in it n i am sorry really
    LikeReply2 years ago
    • Soulwriter
      no worries at all - you can log in and then go to your submitted poems where you can tidy it up and fix mistakes :)
      LikeReply2 years ago
  • bpathamanthan
    hi n welcome i just wanted to publish this cuz i thought it would be fun :)
    LikeReply 22 years ago
    • Soulwriter
      Thanks for posting - it's a sweet poem.
      LikeReply2 years ago

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