What If I Like Rudyard Kipling

What if I like Rudyard Kipling’s
to keep his head about him
without rest
while others, untrusting of selves
might doubt;
and in their doubting prance
about —
and in their pouting rant and rave
without abate,
unmindful  of the viciousness
of their state…

What if I like Rudyard Kipling
about the need for patience
not meandering…
while others sauntering, in ignorance
floundering —
preoccupied with thoughts
not sobering…
to find life’s pathways
troubling —
and  with such mindset kept on

What if I like Rudyard Kipling
of ways to make life better
at opportunities that chance
does offer…
would seize that gift encased
within life’s  coffer…
the valuable lessons learned
to make one wise…
instead of wasting time in telling lies…

What if I like Rudyard Kipling
could write the things one finds
how one can dream and make the dream
come true…
could conjure up some magic potion—
even a brew
that would cure a timid mouse —
perhaps a nagging shrew…
could change misfortune into fortune—
providing start anew…

What if I like Rudyard Kipling —
with poetry of good timing…
the souls of men uplifting,
and in this act…
not rifting;
their hearts and minds not breaking…
Instead, their disappointments—

What if I like Rudyard Kipling…
musing —
with rhyme and meter—
The Malabar scholar
his melodious lyrics
streaming —
I would find my own lines
my mellifluous messages
gleaming …

What if I like Rudyard Kipling’s literature
poets among others —
his pen and ink the pages
the span of time his wisdom
not impeding…
and that I, bereft of youth, a neophyte
could  find a way to scribble
in spite of  limbs impaired, no longer firm
but shrivel…

Then I could ask the poet nesting
at Westminster Abbey, Poet’s Corner
for  tips to keep an old mind
the  body sore, yet spritely
and so withal by making “just so stories”
brimming —
achieve the goal,  a poet’s mind
not dimming…

Oh, with such  a master’s granting I’d be
surely blessed
to have the legacy of poets
made manifest…
For poets like all artists court
the  human soul —
‘Tis their everlasting innate impetus
to become whole…
Pray, with dispensation that I find
that royal  place
where all poets in due time—
are given Grace.

About this poem

Rudyard Kipling’s poem, “If” was perhaps the first poem that I learned to recite by memory and perform before audiences, while growing up as a 12 year-old school boy in Colonial Jamaica, of the British West Indies. My parents would proudly drag me from one performance to another, and I, the eldest of seven children, was eager to please them. Although more than 70 years have passed, and I can no longer recite the lines by memory, Kipling’s poem “If” has forever left an indelible imprint on my psyche. This poem, “What If I Like Rudyard Kipling,” reveals the lasting influence of the poet Kipling on at least one of his neophyte subjects. 

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Written on October 09, 2021

Submitted by karlcfolkes on October 09, 2021

Modified by karlcfolkes on September 08, 2022

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abxbacacxdad Eeaeaeaeaexe Eefeafxfxaa Eeaexghgafhg Eeeexeeae Eefefeaeaeae feaeaexexixi efejeieaeje xbabxkakjaxa
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,491
Words 424
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 12, 12, 11, 12, 9, 12, 12, 11, 12

Karl Constantine FOLKES

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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