Free



It's a closure on your world
When you are in the wrong crowd
It's a darkness that covers you
When your light doesn't shine
It's a feeling of being lost
When you make the wrong choice
It's a dissatisfying feeling
When you lose someone from a killing
It's a bad decision
When you can't see your vision
It's a run down choice
When you lose your choice
When you are lost and can't see your way
Thank God for another day.
A bad choice
Has a loud voice.
A voice unheard
Didn't say a word
A soul well spoken
Won the biggest token

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Feeling free

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Written on September 20, 2021

Submitted by doreenefelder191 on September 20, 2021

Modified on April 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGGHHFFIIFFJJHH
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 512
Words 103
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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