Analysis of The Life Of My Love



Her beauty shrouded,
Her personality hidden,
In crippling anxiety,
From which her depression is driven.
Her true self,
Only to be shown in flashes of happiness,
Small moments of laughter.

All the while,
She's so hard on herself,
Her emotions contagious,
Infecting me the more I see them.

It's ridiculous,
Emotions that are not mine,
Overwhelm me,
Her sadness drives me crazy,
And yet she suppresses them,

What is killing me,
Multiplied by a hundred,
Can only be seen,
After staring into her eyes.


Scheme XABACDX XCDE DXBBE BXXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Metre 01010 0010010 01000100 110010110 011 101110101100 110110 101 111101 0010010 010101111 10100 0101111 011 0101110 0110101 11101 101010 11011 10100101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 477
Words 84
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 4, 5, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted on November 16, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Walrus B

I don't know. I may be 16. My poems are short and usual don't rhyme for a reason. I write what I feel, No more no less, trying to make a poem longer, or trying to make it rhyme, would be forcing words out. more…

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