Analysis of give and TAKE



lets not stir in madness
spirits bubble-up when steered
Lets play a game of "Shutes and Ladders."
"Primary...?"
" I would'nt say, giving the seriousness
of "'Monopol{ly]ies."
Swirling spirits in his cristal glass
a thick lava of red boiling to spew
the mist tickling but no one in the mood
"last evening,I met with an attorney"
Police whistles,buses alerting the stops
and distant mutterings broken-sentences
the crisp night air carrying it all
through the open windows
"Well..?" she said,unalarmed and waiting
like a starving lioness ready to pounce
" I want a divorce",he said.
Everything, the billowing dance of the shears
noises...
STOPPED
with her last card layed firmly put...
He knew,he had lost.........
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Scheme ABCDAAEFGDHIJKLMNOPQRST
Poetic Form
Metre 111010 1010111 110111010 10 1111001000 111 101001101 0110111011 011111001 11111010 01101001 01010010100 011110011 101010 111010 101011011 11011 1001001101 10 1 10111101 1111 111111111111101111010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 848
Words 146
Sentences 15
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 667
Words per stanza (avg) 143
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Submitted on July 03, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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